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Till Death Do Us Apart

by Ragini Puri November 12, 2013 20 comments
mountains, valley

 A walk down the mountain trail,
with the sun shining bright,
the squirrels playing peek-a-boo
flock of birds in flight.

The twinkle of the little stream
running down the vale
patterns of our shadows,
telling many a mushy tale.

Tea by that quaint shack
resting against a tree
manned by that old couple
warm and full of glee.

The day spent traversing,
Many a mountain wide
talking of this and that
letting the time glide.

Love, let us celebrate love,
with nature in our hearts,
hand in hand in the mountains,
Till death do us apart.

Those who seek love, find love. Though true love can seem elusive to many, but it does find us all seekers nonetheless. So eventually when it does discover me, I want my platinum day of love to be spent in the bosom of nature, for nature is eternal – it’s bounties are infinite. How beautiful it would be to sit by a mountain brook, hear the birds sing and watch the world go by.

True love is eternal, infinite, and always like itself. It is equal and pure, without violent demonstrations; it is seen with white hairs and is always young in the heart. 

 — Honore de Balzac

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20 comments

Aditi November 13, 2013 at 5:55 am

well written
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http://spiritandsouladiti.blogspot.com.au/

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B.M. Aggarwal November 13, 2013 at 11:24 am

Very nice post. Congrats.

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Vivek R November 14, 2013 at 9:41 am

beautiful .. felt more like a refreshing trek poem than a poem of love 🙂

something of the sort that someone sitting with a cup of green tea, watching the thick morning mist and lost in thoughts would write 😀

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Manjula November 15, 2013 at 7:33 am

Nice 🙂

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Destination Infinity November 15, 2013 at 1:06 pm

The concept of nature being our true love is…. True! All of us realize this at some point of time in our life. Good take on the prompt 🙂

Destination Infinity

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Ragini Puri November 18, 2013 at 9:02 pm

Thanks Aditi 🙂
Reading your post in a bit.

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Ragini Puri November 18, 2013 at 9:03 pm

Thank you so much Aggarwal Sir.

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Ragini Puri November 18, 2013 at 9:05 pm

Thanks for stopping and appreciating the post Vivek. 🙂
Misty mountains, mint tea and some mush-mush romance – makes for a beautiful mix. 😛

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Ragini Puri November 18, 2013 at 9:06 pm

Thanks Manjula. 🙂

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Ragini Puri November 18, 2013 at 9:06 pm

You summed it up perfectly! Thanks for the appreciation. 🙂

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Hiral Trivedi November 19, 2013 at 4:50 am

Lovely Poem. Cant get better. Celebrating love in the arms of nature. 🙂

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Aayesha Hakim November 25, 2013 at 12:34 pm

beautiful 🙂
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Ragini Puri November 25, 2013 at 6:59 pm

Thanks for the appreciation Hiral! 🙂

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Ragini Puri November 30, 2013 at 9:03 pm

Thank you Aayesha! Very motivating!

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Shaifali December 2, 2013 at 8:46 am

What a beautiful poem! I was tempted to read it just by the title…and I found it equally passionate.

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specs buffy December 16, 2013 at 2:08 pm

Superb and enchanting…felt like being among the hills!

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specs buffy December 16, 2013 at 2:09 pm

and one more thing…loved your blog titles!!!

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Ragini Puri December 27, 2013 at 8:10 pm

Wow, thanks for the appreciation Shaifali! 🙂

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Ragini Puri December 27, 2013 at 8:10 pm

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the words! 🙂

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Ragini Puri December 27, 2013 at 8:11 pm

Thanks again! **Shy smile.

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